In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with
other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In some countries in Europe, old people between the ages of 65-70 years are often taken to care homes where they are being catered for by health workers. The government finances these facilities. In my opinion, i believe this ought to be the family members’ responsibility as it will be beneficial to the nation and the elderly.
To begin with, families should be billed for their parents and grandparents treatments in a caregiver's home because it would reduce the financial burden on a country. The enormous revenue that is being generated by the government ought to be spent on germane issues such as finding cure to terminal diseases. In the UK, for instance, the percentage of the budget allocated to senior citizens in 2018 was 28%. These resources could be allocated to sectors who need more funding from the government.
In addition, paying their fees in this hospice is a way of showing your love. This proves that old age does not mean a person should be ignored or neglected. It is also a way of showing your appreciation. Moreover, knowing they are loved could also improve their health psychologically and make them more active. To illustrate this, a recent research carried out by Havard University discovered that senior citizens,whose offsprings are caring have a longer lifespan than those who do not have any close relatives.
In conclusion, families should be in charge of paying the bills of an older relation who is being cared for by nurses and doctors in a home as this will greatly decrease the pressure on the government and also let them know they are loved.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88560885609 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79521695708 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5161127991 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.846153846 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294944648124 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921452911941 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777892639953 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190224753487 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725066813978 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.