In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with
other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Grey haired people generally prefer to stay with their own kind in any old-age center, wherein they are taken care of by the trained personals. At some places, the state bears the cost of rearing their old citizens, however, I believe that family should shoulder all the expenses of keeping their grandparents at such places, while support to homeless people should still remain with the authorities. This essay intends to discuss the reasons for my said belief.
Firstly, sending old people to home-care is a family decision, wherein the government does not play any role. In other words, if the family tries to provide a healthy and conducive environment to their grandparents, then they might not go to get shelter outside. Regardless of that, even if the parents are willingly interested to spend their remaining lives with similar age group people outside the home, then children should sponsor their this desire. This is because as its parent's duty to take care of their child and made them settle, similarly they are entitled to enjoy the same in return in their late period as they are neither physically nor financially capable to support themselves. Moreover, parents would also feel good to receive support from their children rather than spreading hands in front of the statutory body.
Secondly, the state has a lot of other responsibilities which cannot be shared with anyone such as education, basic health. All these require a great deal of money as well as the organization. Therefore, people taking care of their parents would surely ease the situation of state as they will be focused and aligned on task which can be addressed by the government only. However, homeless and lonely parents need assistance from the authorities to fetch their basic needs.
To conclude, although the government should provide helping hand to those who are without roof on their hand, the parenrs are entitled to be taken care by their children.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04953560372 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5594785075 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7349281396 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.461538462 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207478784534 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075742344288 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604703459905 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124840644566 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508786175424 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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