In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with
other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from
your own knowledge or experience.
Certainly the question of who should pay for the old people expenses is one of the most heated issue which the UK government is still witnessing at present in the economy. I strongly believe that it is the responsibility of the government to not only bear the expenses of the senior citizens but also take better care of their needs.
Firstly, With low pension income and staggering rise in the inflation in the economy from the past 6 weeks has lead to a increase in the prices of goods and services which has make it next to impossible for old age citizens to buy products to fulfill their daily needs. Furthermore, It leads them to do some cost cutting on the essential items, for example cod liver sea oil is rich in protein and are being used daily by old people.
Secondly, Medicinal services has become inevitably more expensive and unreachable from the hands of the poor people because of the exorbitant prices being charged by the hospitals and medical institutes. That is the reason, you may find a big queue outside the government hospital where doctors are less and patient are more.
However, the family should not throw the luggage of their family members at the mercy of the government hands. They should cover their monthly expenses as much as possible by providing them a fixed monthly income to meet their needs.
To sum up, I think that the onus of senior citizens should be taken care by the government because it is not only their duty to give them the financial support but also take better care of their desires and want.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, may, second, secondly, so, still, for example, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68248175182 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45565117793 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551094890511 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.407478251 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.555555556 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4444444444 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246565757252 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097349349521 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556503167951 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127549578079 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517522974705 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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