Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.
There are people who think they will get a lucrative job after finishing University education where as others consider gaining experience and improving soft skills as an important factor. These are basically the two different approach methods to have a desired profile of work in future. This essay will discuss both the aspects.
Firstly, a University education is really necessary in terms of getting the basic knowledge of the particular subject. Which will be beneficial for the people during job. Unless a person knows the key details of the subject he or she can't perform well in the practical field. We have seen many instances in which people having good academic training performs very well in their job. Whereas the people with no academic training have done an average job on the basis of their experience.
Secondly, if we talk about the people who belief that experience and developing soft skills is essential, yes indeed having experience and mounting soft skills are key to a desire career. The only issue with this side is due to lack of University degree people are end up with low salary structure. We have registered lot number of such cases where a skilled person with no academic qualification are hired but on small wages.
In my opinion, acquiring good experience is always benefited pertaining to quality of work delivered however it’s a bit difficult to get a well-paid employment. So, in my views I would suggest people to learn new soft skills and work knowledge simultaneously with the University learning.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0625 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71280555235 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60546875 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3309027242 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6923076923 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279011876029 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896046131278 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872281852883 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163852322153 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372579201372 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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