Do you think it is better for students to work before their university study?
Why?
Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.
Academic education has either always been extremely unaffordable for some or has been highly competitive for others. In both these contexts, having some sort of work experience whether paid or unpaid could benefit the student prior to their academic start. Therefore, I wholeheartedly agree that students must work before their university study commences.
In the past couple of years, academic tuitions have largely inflated resulting in students having to take out heftier loans year after year resulting in them being in debt from a young age itself. If a student were working on a paid basis, it would be fruitful in terms of alleviating the financial burden of their studies in addition to providing them with extra allowance to permit some degree of independence as well. For example, a student with financial savings could themselves cover bills relating to academics, accommodation, groceries, and other necessities either entirely or at least to some extent reducing the need to take out a bigger loan.
Furthermore, any sort of work experience, particularly something closely related to their field of study, would be massively profitable not only in enabling them to understand academic concepts better but also in standing out from other recently graduated applicants when applying for post-study jobs. For instance, it is highly likely that a food company would hire a quality assurance intern with some working knowledge of food safety than a recent graduate with no experience at all.
To conclude, there are numerous benefits to students undertaking work prior to joining university for studies with the most impactful ones being those of financial security and exposure into corporate environments. This altogether would truly hone a student’s skill set positively and set them apart from their peers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, apart from, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40559440559 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84790585412 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629370629371 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4480584166 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.6 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202070743634 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093278027855 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668500977057 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1349343919 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045370023468 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.