Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Health is one’s strongest wealth. The services of health should be subsidized or made free of cost to the public even if the latest technology-driven services are not available due to the high cost. I completely agree with the statement because basic health service is very necessary for any individual. There are many factors which support my agreement. In fact, few of the countries are currently giving free service.
Firstly, basic health services are very routine in nature like fever, cold which keeps on recurring at every second home. If the basic treatment will be made free, an individual can save money for expensive treatments. Secondly, the public can take medical insurance for expensive treatments as basic consultation is not covered in the insurance. In India, polio was a big problem till 1995, once the government made it free, India has eradicated the problem from the root and India do not has even 1% of the patients of polio since 2005. An initiative of the government towards the elimination of a disease can help the general public.
However, the negative implication of the same could be that the doctors may not give the treatment to the patient since the patient cannot afford the same. The traditional approach of dealing with a disease may not work out as every day a new disease is growing up.
To close upon, free health services can really benefit the public in every country even to the niche of basic services only. We can eradicate many diseases in the starting only so that it does not prosper in the body which calls for an expensive treatment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88560885609 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65535527117 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571955719557 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2157712037 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5714285714 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252892927665 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834910571008 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600179453606 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153410331038 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644945358425 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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