The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The obesity is definitely growing now a days and is putting a strain on the health care system in order to deal with the issues involved with the health. Few of us are still thinking that the best way to deal is by introducing physical education lessons in the school and I strongly agree to this statement.
Firstly, when the school children will be introduced to physical education lessons on daily basis, definitely they will try to keep themselves fit. The children should be aware of all the bad effect of obesity. If the children are aware of these things definitely they will be informing their parents, caretaker of the same. So this way both the child as well as his parents/Caretaker will be more alert with respect to the diet they are taking. Also, children should be aware of the ill effect of obesity. These physical education lessons will definitely help the child to lead a healthy life, thereby helping our children to be a fast learner in the school.
Also, by encouraging more number of exercises and sports in the school, will helping our nation also to grow. As, all of us will be motivated even though if elder people do not show interest in doing exercise daily, they will start doing it by looking at their children. So the sports in the school along with exercise will definitely play an important role, in reducing weight. As once you develop this interest from your childhood, you will become so used to it that you will never feel like leaving as you grow older. So school will be playing an important role by organizing more sports and exercises in the school. Obesity if the major cause of disease and due to obesity, people suffer from many diseases.
To conclude, obesity will definitely be controlled by the promoting physical educations in the school, thereby by it will reduce the number of disease, which will occur only by gaining weight. So, to stay healthy we need to adopt the exercise and also take part in as many sports as we can, in order to keep ourselves free from such harmful diseases.
To stay healthy, we must ensure we are taking a proper diet and by undergoing through the physical exercises.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...xercises and sports in the school, will helping our nation also to grow. As, all of us ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, so, still, well, as well as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7018469657 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49872113822 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480211081794 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.028510385 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.823529412 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2941176471 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201497121149 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739982150526 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10086081033 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144620838256 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.180901120121 0.056905535591 318% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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