The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A growing percentage of the overweight population is a topic of hot discussion. Due to this, the already well-established health care system of many countries is reeling under pressure to tackle the rise in health problems related to the overweight population. Many believe that the government should increase the syllabus of physical education subjects being taught in schools. I strongly believe that introducing more chapters on physical education in schools will be beneficial.
To begin with, If from schools the children are taught about the benefits of engaging in physical exercises, they will pick up the habit of doing physical workout daily. Moreover, it will develop interest among them to choose among various sports. For example, when someone studies about different kinds of sports, it is natural to develop an interest in them. Also, the lessons on the disadvantages of not doing exercise will make young children aware of the ill effects of being fat. This will automatically make the youth to leave their comfort zone and join health clubs.
There are always chances of picking up an injury while doing a workout which discourages a lot of people from doing exercises like yoga. But if proper guidance is provided in schools about how to avoid injury, there are fewer chances of someone to skip daily gym classes. Furthermore, it is very important to maintain proper posture during the workout for maximum results and a piece of proper knowledge can do a miracle. Lastly, a proper diet is an essential component to remain healthy and fit. Therefore, the chapters on diet plans can play a vital role to make the upcoming generation healthy.
In conclusion, more lessons should be added to the current physical education syllabus in schools. That will make our youth more aware of their wellbeing. Hence, the stress on the present health care system will be reduced.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12258064516 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69210894511 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554838709677 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5424867519 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4117647059 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204476436231 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606283754572 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512898612187 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124202302867 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602051900811 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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