The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing

Essay topics:

The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing

The world is now a global object at the tap of the hands to everyone which has been accessible. Some believed that access to information irrespective of the location has greatly increased through the internet platform. This essay will discuss extensively to which this impact has been positive.

About three decades ago, the rise of inter connectivity to the global world at large has been of great necessity to the advance world of today. This platform has reshaped several sectors of life such as communication, research both in academics and technology, business and countries at large. However, the world wide web service has been able to shortened the distance in communication as of today, irrespective of the geographical location the use of social services such whats app, Instagram and Facebook has helped to keep friendship intact.

Obviously, research development over the last two decals has taken a huge turn as to how many researcher in different fields has been able to progress exponentially in aspect such as medicine, physics, and space. This has not only expand the scope of researches but also academicians and students. The web services has helped many students in the area of thesis and dissertation, several experiments observed in the laboratory and collaborations with other students at other part of the world adding knowledge to each other Several conference has been witnessed through this services at other destination where scientist congregated.

Furthermore, microscopically, learning has been subjected to different form. This does not necessarily have to be observed under physical edifice but now accessed online with been physically present. this has helped lots of people with difference legit reason as to why they can't attend physically.

In conclusion, internet has greatly impacted the world of today with huge information accessibility which depicts no more barrier to information.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, as to, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43853820598 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05586083606 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564784053156 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.0227056162 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.923076923 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132076350861 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054322698158 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576843612532 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901555592294 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538817788923 0.056905535591 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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