It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is pivotal that children should understand the dissimilarities among correct and incorrect things is thought by some individuals and penalty is essential to absorb the difference. I completely agree and believe we should guide the right education to our kids at the early stages of life and make corrections in their behaviour through penalty.
To begin with, it is important to educate children at a young age because the activities of wrongdoing by children can become a habit if not controlled properly at an early stage. Education on the difference between right and wrong is essential for a person in the early stages of life to have a good path throughout the career. For instance, children stealing money from the pocket of their parent can easily have the courage to conduct robbery in future, if their habit is not curbed as quickly as possible.
Similarly, punishment is essential to teach lessons forever, it helps children to remember for lifetime. Punishments can ensure that children not to repeat mistakes because it has a psychological impact on children mind in the form of fear and these tortures have a long-lasting effect on them, therefore, it is the prime way to guide children about the difference in the wrong and right activities. A recent survey from Children NGO revealed that the children who are punished by their parents or teacher during childhood become more successful in a career as compared with those who are not punished. Hence, a penalty is a must in teaching right education.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that we must educate the difference between right and wrong activities to our children at their adolescent age and juvenile should be punished to remember the lessons for a lifetime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, similarly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02422145329 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85824040276 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505190311419 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.7470986962 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.2 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254402392772 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105176378714 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597290289663 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159679201215 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498865728526 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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