It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society.
Do you agree or disagree?
I agree with the above statement which tells that encouraging an individual to get married before 30 is best for both the individual and the society as well. However, some people have opposite way of thinking where the age is just taken as the number in their life to get married.
In some societies, people believe that if your age gets older than 30 than there may be the difficulties in finding the perfect life partner who is close enough to your age. This belief is mostly persisted in mostly Asian countries like India, Pakistan, Bangladesh etc. For instance, Ms. Rekha the famous celebrity told in one interview that after she crossed 30 to make her carrier, she did not find any proper partner and that is the reason she is still single.
On the other hand, in foreign countries, people have no age deadline in marriage. They marry when they need to get married. They also do not need any age similarities to get engaged. For example, Mr. Bill Murray, a 70 year American actor announces his 3rd wedding with the 28 years old actress Salena Gomez recently in one interview. Because, in there society their ancestors does not force them to get marry to a close age partners. They are trained in that type from the beginning.
However, getting married with the older ones or getting married in the age after 30 is the individuals choice. But, it has been seen that only some of this wedding couples stay together in the future. In one the survey taken by an American journalist on the old age weddings shows the highest amount of divorce and unhappy weddings are of the people who got married after 30.
Anyway to sum it up, I believe that if the wedding should be done before the age of 30 then that would be the better step for community and the sole person. Otherwise, sometime there may be some complications in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...Salena Gomez recently in one interview. Because, in there society their ancestors does ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, however, if, may, so, still, then, well, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60790273556 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38096186594 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1682079769 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.75 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350689166882 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107778226427 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09676272263 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194790746649 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796451798866 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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