In many countries traditional customs are being lost. Why do you think this is? What can parents and schools do to keep traditional customs alive?
Modernization had ruined the nuance of a diverse society. It is evident that, traditional cultures are losing their importance with each passing day. This essay will discuss reasons as to why this is happening and what inputs parents and schools can provide to deal with this issue.
Although, traditions play vital part in diverse countries like India, their significance has reduced extremely, owing to the influence of western culture. People today are keen on adapting foreign lifestyle. They want to wear clothes of famous brand, eat food from franchise existing all over the world and even converse in language English which is universally acceptable. More students today, for example, are choosing academics with international languages rather than learning their own mother tongue, resulting in a gradual downfall of the population speaking regional language. Because of this, local traditions and indigenous way of living are compromised.
Nevertheless, parents and teachers should co-ordinate with each other and teach children the value of their customs. Schools can arrange different functions during festivals and encourage students to dress-up in traditional attire or engage in competitions like folk dancing. On the other hand, parents should preach their child about cultural beliefs and family traditions. For example, one of my friends is Bengali and her parents make sure that she always attends the Durga Puja celebrations during the festival of Navratri as it is a crucial religious custom followed by their ancestors every year. Such initiative will have powerful impositions on young minds and persuade them to indulge in ethnicity.
In conclusion, despite a nose dive is being observed in followers of traditional customs, a gradual increase can be achieved through joint venture of parents and schools in keeping them alive. In my opinion, a mutual effort is a must to preserve the richness of a country’s heritage.
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Suggestion: must; have to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33774834437 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72997933297 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655629139073 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 302.0 20.2975951904 1488% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1612.0 106.682146367 1511% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 302.0 20.7667163134 1454% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 89.0 7.06120827912 1260% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274248805976 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.274248805976 0.084324248473 325% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168831017076 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727961199373 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 154.7 13.0946893788 1181% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -243.51 50.2224549098 -485% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 122.3 11.3001002004 1082% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.17 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.79 8.58950901804 277% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 122.8 10.1190380762 1214% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 123.0 10.7795591182 1141% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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