Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Others think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While some people believe that encouraging pupils to give feedback about their teachers' performance could increase educational quality, others argue that it will result in chaos as students would not follow their teachers’ instructions anymore. In my opinion, although it is crucial to ask for students’ feedback, some boundaries must not be crossed such as mutual respect between teachers and their students.
On the one hand, persuading youngster to speak up their mind and expressing their feeling freely, prepares them for future debates and dilemma that they would probably face upon entering the society. It makes adolescents to become active members of their community, who demand their rights and have learned the right way to show their disagreements without getting violent. Moreover, school’s authorities can significantly benefit from student’s feedback since teenagers are the one who are subjected to the education system. Thus, they can provide the best insight about what needs to be improved or what steps must be taken to tackle the existing issues.
On the other hand, some people argue that giving voice to young adults is a mistake. First of all, if you give students the power to question, they undoubtedly criticize everything from their teachers’ appearance to their tone of voice. Therefore, after a while these discussions will turn to humiliation which is not only destructive but also unbearable. Secondly, students who have been allowed to judge their teachers will not recognize their authority anymore. As a result, disciplining the pupils would become even a more challenging task since students do not see teachers as superior to themselves and worthy of their respects. Nevertheless, all these predicaments can be prevented if precautionary steps are taken while conducting survey on teachers. After all, it is a part of responsibilities of a successful education system to teach students how to be fair and polite while expressing their opinion about others.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that obtaining feedback from students not only improve the quality of education but also gives juvenile beneficial long lasting skills to be critical yet stay moral.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, after all, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49709302326 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00046051766 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1887764582 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.071428571 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2857142857 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229816007002 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794536883124 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425722008869 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137619109424 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451297618186 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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