Many people say that movies and TV programs affect us negatively while others say that they are two influential and useful media for us. How do movies and TV affect us?
In recent years, there has been a major advancement in entertainment industry. Some individuals opine that films and TV shows have detrimental impacts while others consider it a persuasive yet beneficial medium of information. This essay will further discuss how the media has influenced the society in detail.
It is easy to understand why these platforms are considered harmful impositions. Firstly, a great amount of time is devoted in watching movies and television as they have become a widely acceptable activity to spare free time. For example, youngsters today have a set routine to watch movies on every weekends. Because of this, less time is spend with other family members and indulging in social activities has become a rare instance which, in turn creates communication gap among a family unit.
Secondly, an increased amount of screen will inevitably harm ones health. In other words, vision impairment and obesity are a few associated adverse events of constant gazing on digital screen.
Despite these disadvantages there are certain advantages of watching films and serials. As some entertainment source is required to distract a busy mind from whole day of work and an ease access to movies owning to advanced internet facilities has made it convinent for everyone to utilise them as a way to light the mood. Moreover, various talent shows like indian idol and super dancer, provide a chance to aspiring individuals to broadcast their talents on TV reality shows. Watching such shows will motivate more and more youngsters to develop their area of interest with confidence. Hence, allocating a fixed amount of time for cinema and sitcoms can be proved to be fruitful.
In summary, it can be reiterated that althought media has a malicious impact on society as well as individuals, its judicious implementation will have favourable impacts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in summary, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16722408027 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82021713345 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625418060201 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 299.0 20.2975951904 1473% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1545.0 106.682146367 1448% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 299.0 20.7667163134 1440% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 119.0 7.06120827912 1685% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101301194972 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101301194972 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0496171041958 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290075896565 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 152.4 13.0946893788 1164% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -240.47 50.2224549098 -479% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 121.1 11.3001002004 1072% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.19 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.75 8.58950901804 277% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 9.78957915832 633% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 121.6 10.1190380762 1202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 122.0 10.7795591182 1132% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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