In many places new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?
Constructing knew dwelings in countryside has become introversial. Although some people concern about the environment and local culture of these areas, others, including me, believe there is a protective approach for expanding them.
Firstly, building new houses in countryside will help region to take advantages of modern life including welfare, modern technology, and new transportation devices. The new dwellers in these regions need to travel to work, so some modern transportation systems such as Metro, monorail or even airport are required. This means much more access to other states and cities. Furthermore, to apply more job opportunities for them, some factories and infrastructures are essential, which means economy growth for their rural areas. Since that, this phenomenon may lead to modern towns with considerable economical growth.
Next, the industrialization and access to modern technology may help the local areas to become a part of World Village. In other words, the local people gain the opportunity to have conversation with other states and countries, which, in return, means better communication with the World. This provides them a better chance for trading even internationally. There are some towns whose products and handcrafts have been sold on other countries on the Internet.
On the other hand, environmental concerns of opponents are understandable. Industrialization has posed many environmental problems through history. However, there are green approaches for this inevitable phenomenon in the world. And many investigations are done to tackle this issue. Moreover, they are also worried about the local culture to be ruined, but this concern is seemed to be wrong. Not only will not the culture be forgotten or spoilt, but also introducing it to the world may help it become popular and attract much considerable attention.
In conclusion, some people are opposing constructing new dwellings in rural areas to protect the circumstance and the culture. Nevertheless, it will help these regions to experience economical growth and industrialization.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 597, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... lead to modern towns with considerable economical growth. Next, the industrialization an...
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Line 4, column 497, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...introducing it to the world may help it become popular and attract much considerable a...
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Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...t will help these regions to experience economical growth and industrialization.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62341772152 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27531951324 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54746835443 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4846300613 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5263157895 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6315789474 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21052631579 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232886268098 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638280860583 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513542487227 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125164340899 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575117849241 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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