In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion?
Living in a dream house is everybody’s most wanted wish. However, many people in Hong Kong do not afford to buy a reasonable place to live due to the soaring price. With increasing demand, some suggested to build new houses in the countryside, while others claimed that it should be protected so houses should not be built there. I think the government should make a policy to produce more homes even in the countryside so as to deal with the high demand as soon as possible.
Lack of housing is the number one urging social problem in the city. No land is available for new building in the city centre and the surrounding developed areas. According to the latest land usage review report, it stated that more than 95% of unused land is situated in the countryside. It seems that development in rural areas is the only way to cope with the issue. It will be wise not to waste the untouched natural resource by expanding the city and let people live in a garden view estates.
The opposite recommended to redevelop older districts to reserve country parks. In the contrary, this suggestion might take decades to complete a project. There would be a lot of tedious legal and social issues to be resolved. Developers have to buy the land of an existing building while the owners may not be easy to find, so it makes the negotiation difficult. Also, neighbourhood and the general public would concern the safety and pollution problem caused the construction site in the middle of a crowded street. However, developing outside urban areas has fewer restrictions. Therefore, it could be a faster choice to get people a home.
In conclusion, the price of housing is increasing as population growth, and most urban areas are fully occupied. Development in the countryside is the fastest way to rectify the angry voice from the people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 426, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...duce more homes even in the countryside so as to deal with the high demand as soon as po...
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Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended redeveloping'.
Suggestion: recommended redeveloping
... garden view estates. The opposite recommended to redevelop older districts to reserve country park...
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Line 9, column 393, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... difficult. Also, neighbourhood and the general public would concern the safety and pollution ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, as to, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82649842271 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74705995661 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586750788644 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1128355256 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175495517149 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436327711385 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573475491649 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929362595776 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600197748136 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.