Nowadays individuals take their family with them to abroad whenever they go for a business trip. What are the advantages and disadvantages on individual and on his/her family?
With the advent of modern civilization, there has been a radical change in way people do things. They are known to let their loved ones join them in their official meetings in other location. Unarguably, there are certain merits associated with this practice including opportunity to spend extra time with their family, along with preparing their children to take bigger roles in future. However, numerous drawbacks including work disturbance and a negative impact on relationship, have proven to be true in nature.
Undoubtedly, humans today are known to have a wider mindset. And for this reason, they are enthusiastic with the idea of having their family members beside them, every time they get chance of. Therefore, these trips enhance their chance of spending more time with their dear ones. And because of these trips, Family members will not feel deprived, a normal thing these days because of work overload, ultimately resulting in better relations and bonding. Moreover, it helps in making younger generation get ready for the future responsibilities, as they would be the one taking over. To exemplify, one of the article from economic times revealed that most business class people in today’s generation fancy involving respective family members in order to divide responsibilities, eventually resulting in creation of an organized work life balance for them.
Although, there are some good advantages that one can think of, there are some demerits that can cause adverse effects. Having family members on a work trip can cause humiliation, resulting in havoc. In other words, family members may cause disturbance at crucial times. Moreover, family may not enjoy accompanying their spouse to these trips as their spouse’s are bound to work, instead of having a gala time with their loved ones. This in turn, can have a detrimental impact on their relationship, which can sometimes lead to life changing decisions. One such example of this is of my uncle and his family. Because of his regular meetings, he had to take his family along with him. This actually backfired and became the root cause of their divorce. Furthermore, these trips are generally known to be short in nature, hence proving to be nothing but a vacation for other family members.
To conclude, no one can deny the fact that there has been a surge wherein business trips are not limited merely to business these days. People are known to take advantage of these trips by on boarding their family members as this not only provides them with extra family time, but also helps in providing exposure to the upcoming generation, making them experienced enough to take on larger roles. Having said that, disadvantages like disturbing effect on relationship, as well as, work related disturbance, are going to exist side by side.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2360.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 459.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14161220044 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70210655067 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527233115468 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 761.4 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6160704166 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.272727273 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8636363636 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306736678547 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898684049391 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671744451228 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201232527995 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037904948319 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.