Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, it creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is a given fact that international tourism is one of the popular and the biggest industry in the world. Some believe that it creates unrest between people, personally I disagree.
On the other hand although international tourism is great way to get acquainted to the countries culture, however, the impact of creating misunderstanding and unrest cannot be ignored. For example, tourist are expected to follow the visiting countries dress code. To illustrate further, Islamic countries like Saudi Arabia and Iraq expect tourist to dress in appropriate attire i.e. cover their head and body. However, misunderstanding arises when tourist do not follow their dress code as per their culture. Similarly, confusion arises when tourist tries to communicate with the locals in their language but ends up communicating incorrectly. Thus, it is possible to state beyond doubt that tourism ends up creating tension.
On the other hand there is ample evidence that states international tourism is not only a great way to understand different cultures, creates harmony and source of livelihood. The central reason behind this is twofold, firstly, international tourism gives a platform to people to understand, accept and with other country’s unique culture, heritage and values, which in turn creates harmony. Secondly, tourism is a great source of revenue for many country’s especially those who do not have a strong GDP growth. For example, recent empirical research by the UK Government demonstrated that for a few countries 90% revenue for the last fiscal year was generated through international tourism. Therefore, it is conclusively clear that international tourism not only makes people aware about the culture but also adds to the countries revenue.
From the arguments and examples given I firmly believe that international tourism helps in creating harmonious relations between countries and aids in generating revenue. It is predicted that international tourism will increasingly grow in importance in the near future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, thus, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54487179487 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0936179029 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560897435897 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3307691549 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231161601217 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814039824588 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606207771723 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151822306254 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050498308404 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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