Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. to what extent do you agree and disagree with this opinion. Give your own opinion also.
It is irrefutable that the tourism industry has experienced a tremendous boom in the recent years which boosted the culture and tradition exchange. while some conflicts have been occurred owing to this issue. I accede that by the growth of this travel sector, people gain positive impacts more rather than the negative.
Let us now throw some light on the first opinion of the cultural and tradition exchange. There is no denying the fact that mushroom in the travel industry lead to cultural diversity which helped visitors to learn the profound facts of traditions of indigenous people. Moreover, it has assisted to break the linguistic barrier which resulted in to open the new businesses in the tourist places. To illustrate, in kasol, India, many Indonesian tourists stay there for years and establish their houses and run several businesses.
Let us now elaborate the second opinion of the exchange has destroyed the religious value of the local residents. Because vacationer’s do not have the same sentiments and respect towards the religion of the spot which they visit. In addition to this, tourists damage the natural resources such as water supply, beaches, ponds, lakes etcetera by throwing the garbage and sometimes it resulted in to put several restrictions on the tourists. To exemplify, authority’s of Manali, India have banned the vehicles of the traveler to use to go to Rohtang valley.
In my own opinion, no doubt some troubles occur with the growth of tourism. However, it has provided the better opportunities for the people to elevate their economy and it helped them to spread their culture and tradition.
In an epilogue, administrations can control some misunderstandings by enforcing the better law and order, so that a good relationship can be maintained between the local inhabitants and tourists to accelerate the tourist industry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...ted the culture and tradition exchange. while some conflicts have been occurred owing...
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Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ted the culture and tradition exchange. while some conflicts have been occurred owing...
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Line 5, column 538, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... banned the vehicles of the traveler to use to go to Rohtang valley. In my own o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, so, while, in addition, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2657807309 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96671974289 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598006644518 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0181862896 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.214285714 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104337996897 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353730717021 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037416906718 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594897009925 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452335910601 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.