Nowadays many people get married and have children in their 30s rather than when they were younger. Is it a positive or negative development? Is it a positive or a negative development? Give your opinion and examples based on your experience.
In recent years, it has been observed that people usually prefer not to marry at their early stage of life, rather, they take time for starting their conjugal life and having kids at around the thirties. This is mainly because of the changes in perspective of the people on how they view their life. To me, it is really a wise idea for a successful and happy life, albeit there are few negligible negatives of this new idea.
To begin with, firstly, this option provides a breathing space for everyone to be more mature in designing their own life. This is because, whenever anyone just come out from the educational institute and starts the first job- sometimes push him or her into the turbulence of life struggles. Therefore, marrying soon after their educational life and at the beginning of their working life may exacerbate the situation, resulting in unstable performance in the family and other aspects of life. Thus, getting married around the thirties will help them to organize their career more meaningfully and will boost up the ultimate success. In a survey, done in Australia last year, reflecting the same notion. According to that survey who married after their initial readiness of the career, landed with more happiness compared to those became parents just after getting the first job.
Secondly, getting married late will provide more financial freedom as well as stability. What I mean here is that the first job is undoubtedly the entry-level job with minimal wages, with very few exceptions. Therefore, in majority cases, the big chunk of the salary is usually being spent on paying the rents, ensuring basic livelihood and making some deposits for future. In this early period of life, making a new family and becoming parents causes extreme financial pressure which sometimes results in applying for bank loans, making the financial stability more fragile. Thus, it is always wise to make some handsome money first so that one can handle his family and siblings smoothly in the later part, without any hazards. The Russian people, maybe for the same reason, get married at their later stage of life when they are sound in money matters.
All things considered, people should consider a lot of factors before getting married and having siblings. They must remember, making a family is easy but running it smoothly requires a lot of stability. Thus late marriage always provides that great opportunity to bear that great responsibility.
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, i mean, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2061.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0391198044 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50376776236 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574572127139 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9759037894 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7222222222 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117077231746 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401115756551 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404461871121 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793345392088 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029300021389 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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