Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
Technology has changed the method of communication among people at present times. This had made the bond between people stronger by bringing them closer and it is absolutely a positive advancement because it made global outsourcing possible by linking all employers and employees of the world through the internet.
High tech development has been boon for connecting the friends and family via world wide web and mobile devices. Now, anyone in any part of the world can get in touch with anybody in another area of the planet through handheld devices. Not only they can hear each other voice but also, they can see each other through video calling and picture sharing. Furthermore, this has reduced the stress of being away from loved ones drastically. For example, I can see my father who is in India from Canada only because of skype’s or any other application’s video connecting feature and do not feel homesick.
Amelioration in technology is certainly fruitful as it has made world economically sound by globalization. The present time technological era has made global outsourcing possible as any employer can interview and hire any employee all over the world. It has reduced the scarcity of labour that wealthy nations face nowadays. Even this made it feasible to reduce the unemployment rate prevailing in the developing countries. For instance,15% of employees of American are outsourced and out of that 5% are Asians.
In conclusion, technological advancements have changed the interactions among people in the present world which have made the people's relations with each other more connected than before and it is a positive advancement for a global world.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23247232472 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00393482053 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571955719557 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6658552356 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182117698638 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606323463221 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603198973854 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127314743864 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655595452296 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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