Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Why do you think this is happening?
What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is true that the production of waste is in excess. Because of growing population and increased demand, the consumption of goods is getting increased. Almost everything comes with a packing and this is ultimately resulting a huge amount of garbage. To limit this excessive production of rubbish, government can play a very important role. In this essay, we will discuss a few points to highlight that why the waste production is growing and what government need to do to tame this.
Firstly, the main source of rubbish is from packaging of medium and large size items. These items are packed in various layers to protect being damage and also to look attractive. For instance, packaging of fridge, TV, washing machine etc. These items contributes a lot in waste building. According to me, government should enforce a law and limit the layers of material being used for packaging. If a single layer of plastic or cardboard is reduced, it will reduce a significant amount of wastage.
Secondly, there is a numerous amount of garbage being generated with the use of plastic covers. This is used by small retailers in-order to sell their products. Almost every item comes in a plastic cover. For instance, if we buy a vegetable, we will get a plastic cover with it, also if we purchase a bread, we get that in a plastic bag. These all plastic get accumulated and results a huge amount of garbage. I think government should impose a total ban on these plastic covers. We have seen a few cities where government has put total ban on these plastic bags and the city is comparatively much garbage free now.
To conclude, I think the main source of rubbish is from packaging of bulky items and also from the excessive use of plastic covers. Government should impose the strict laws to limit the use of material being used in wrapping the items and also to stop using plastic covers in small retailers shops.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77039274924 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63408074256 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483383685801 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.173634109 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.95 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.55 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144230208694 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449267772837 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044062340209 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922446316618 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035206809822 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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