Science will soon make people live up to 100 or even 200 years. Some believe this is a good thing while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Medical technology will allow people to live for a century or more. It is argued that living a long life has its benefits, however, others believe there are drawbacks to this. This essay agrees that having a lengthy lifespan is not beneficial to a country's economy.
Clearly, advance in science and technology will enable humans to live a happy life for over ten decades. This means that the elderly ones will be alive to see their children prosper. Also, the joy of seeing your offsprings become parents and grand parents is extraordinary. For example, an aged mother or father would be deliriously happy to be present during the birth of a great grand child. Nevertheless, one does not have to live beyond a certain age to be joyful. For this reason, i disagree with this viewpoint.
On the other hand, longevity of life would have a drastic effect on a nation's economy. The retirement age in most countries is sixty five and it is the government responsibility to care for these people once they retire. With modern science leading to increase in people's lifespan, the number of dependents will rise enormously. To illustrate this, a recent research shows that the figure of older citizens is taking up half of the country's annual budget.
In conclusion, the success in medical research will, in a few years, result in humans living for centuries. While this will bring about uncountable joy to the old, the nation's finances will suffer the impact of this development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90836653386 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66715735447 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605577689243 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0404475265 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.1333333333 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199367667797 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673457979815 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404724692325 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130120303637 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313453056932 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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