Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
With the advancement in medical field, it has been seen that many childhood diseases can be cured through the use of vaccines. There is a notion that parents must be obliged to do vaccination of their children while others feel that there should be voluntary decision of a parent. This essay will discuss its benefits and drawbacks with feasible conclusion.
Vaccination should be mandatory because, if children are vaccinated then major diseases can be eradicated at the early age. This will not only protect them from detrimental effects of any diseases but also shielded them from having symptoms of periodical common diseases. To lay some example, it is revealed by health organisation in India that the percentage of polio disease declined at high rate on dint of vaccinations. Parents are not aware of its importance for their juveniles.Through its legislation they considered it as their priority and also came to know which vaccination is necessary for thier age. Furthermore, the biggest advantage of this is, that it also protect the child from disease while travelling to disease prone countries. For instance, BCG vaccination is necessary if a person is travelling to developing nations like India and Malaria vaccine is needed if you are traveling to Africa.
On the other hand, vaccinations has cons too. Firstly, these vaccination has side effects too which has hazardous impact on the health of children such as high fever, vomiting, loose motions, unconscious etc. Secondly, some immunizations are not recovered by government especially in developing nations which is not affordable by everyone. It sometimes disturb their budget so this decision should be leave on individuals whether they want to opt it or not.
In conclusion, vaccination played a vital role in the upbringing of children so parents should not ignore its importance and try to vaccinate their child at appropriate age and time to give them a healthy future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22185430464 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90594373875 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569536423841 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8027397622 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.642857143 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207439915824 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730309882862 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849836763627 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133895926251 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469045749762 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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