Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, double income families have become a norm and most of the people work hard in order to reach their goals and make a living so having some time for recreational activities is a necessity for individuals. People have different views on the issue of whether hobbies should be difficult to be more pleasant or not. To a certain extend I agree that the more difficult leisure activities are more exciting but I also think that the hobbies that are not tough can be amusing as well.
There are some persuasive arguments in favor of less difficult activities and hobbies. Firstly, leisure activities are supposed to be entertaining and amusing and they do not need to be difficult to cover these features. Secondly, the modern life style brings a large amount of stress and anxiety to human beings' lives and consequently they need some recreational activities that sooth their mind, give them a nice relaxation and lift up their spirit such as playing a musical instrument, gardening, swimming, collecting stamps and the like. A salient example of this is USA that conducted a survey in 2008 about the popularity of easy hobbies among people and the result reveals that almost 70% of fellows were advocates of less difficult leisure activities.
On the other hand, some people argue that more challenging sports and activities such as banjo jumping, rock climbing, rock biking, scuba diving and surfing are much more exciting and interesting since they could raise the blood Adrenalin which leads to happiness and excitement in people. Furthermore, fulfilling these types of activities need a potent concentration and as a result the people who are involving them have no time to think about their daily routines and problems. To support my claim, I can refer to an article having been published in Times magazine, indicates that that majority of residents of European countries are interested in difficult hobbies and they find these activities more appealing.
In conclusion, although excitement has a significant role in people's life, we should choose a hobby that suits our personality since it would effect our life and spirit in a decent way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...o be more pleasant or not. To a certain extend I agree that the more difficult leisure...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ntration and as a result the people who are involving them have no time to think about their ...
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...at suits our personality since it would effect our life and spirit in a decent way.
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Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a decent way" with adverb for "decent"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nce it would effect our life and spirit in a decent way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07584269663 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75524284748 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.2539012901 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.272727273 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3636363636 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7272727273 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243645360562 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106102454901 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784749095717 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142520944232 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810714407008 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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