Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent years, education is widely available in all means. While some people believe that homeschool is an appropriate method for child's development, others argue that public school is preferable. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages of both the sides of the argument and explain my support for the latter statement.
School at home help in increasing the concentration power, while away from the crowded classrooms. As, student tend to spend more time in isolation, which eventually boasts their mental stability. For example, a famous physics scientist Albert Thomas who studied all alone in his teenage, as a result, he received the Nobel prize for his achievement in the field of Relative Kinetic Energy. Admittedly, neural brain cells development can be achieved faster when an individual study alone.
However, socialism and real-life experience do play a significant role in the improvement of student psychology. For instance, I believe schools provide the opportunity for indoor and outdoor sports which is not possible at home. Additionally, in institutes, the spirit of competition makes the pupil stronger and capable of taking a decision at a crucial stage of life. for example, choosing the right job at right time fulfills the requirement of the life settlement.
To sum up, despite home education provide numerous benefits, the range of expertise and resources that schools offer cannot be matched in the home. School environments may present difficult social situations, but so too does the real world and children must learn to navigate these on their own.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87887458415 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686507936508 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.894983004 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.384615385 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298462923612 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876974154023 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872817905551 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160768287797 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067564355582 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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