Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying a product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g. medical treatment).
Do you agree or disagree?
As the saying goes " Money cannot buy anything and everything" which is true in every aspect of life. Although, it is a known fact that while considering a purchase may it be a tangible or intangible cost is what matters to people the most, but not always. Certainly, there are many other criterias that help a person to arrive at a decision to buy or not to buy. I completely disagree to the statement stating money as the utmost thing for deciding a purchase. The following essay will discuss this in detail.
Yes, there have been instances where people must have thought about money first while reaching at a decision to buy some item or to decide on a service provider but very few. For example, this can majorly happen in situations where people are going for luxury items which are a matter of prestige, hence the price at which it is bought is of importance, moreover, it is a status symbol. Lets take another example, say brand loyalty, if an individual is consistent towards a certain brand for years then whatever may be the price it does not hamper his/her buying decision reason being trust towards the quality. After all these are just handfull number of buyers. Whereas, there a humungous amount of people who belong to the otherside of the story.
Can money buy you happiness or memories? the answer to this will always remain no. Inspite of money being one of the factors there are other criterias which are also taken into account along with money. For example; if a person has someone close hospitalised and needs to have a medicine thats expensive he/she cannot keep money as a decider because here life is what matters more rather than money. Some people may borrow money from the bank or take some other assistance and would go on a tour with family or a solo trip to a remote place because here moments that are captured while on the trip, the enjoyment, thrill etc is counted before taking the cost of the trip into consideration.
To conclude, as stated above i completely disagree that money can only be the of deciding factor to go or not to go for purchase. The other factors have more weightage that money because if we keep considering money before buying things or taking a service that we cannot enjoy the right moments in the right age or time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, whereas, while, after all, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64619164619 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45683291798 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518427518428 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.5248735232 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.235294118 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9411764706 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133575694634 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442774621581 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374381169647 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885812918321 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270120874192 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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