Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying a product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g. medical treatment).
Do you agree or disagree?
Cost is often a key consideration that affects consumer behavior. while it is important for people to have their budget in mind, I strongly believe it is not always worth compromising on quality for getting a good bargain. However, if there are equally promising offers, it should always be a trade-off between price and quality.
To begin with, financial constraints limit many people's choices while shopping or selecting a service. it is often a case when people have other important priorities also to attend to. For example, a person whose monthly pay is only ten thousands will be willing to spend less money on his child's bag or his own cell phone than he is likely to spend on educational materials such as books and stationery and medical care. This illustrates that not all people can take the liberty to own upmarket products.
However, high-class people do not tend to compare his choices by looking at the price tag. In fact, quality of the product and service is more likely to be the deciding factor for him. Hence, if a product appears desirable to people who do not have an issue with money, they will find out if the product is durable and has a long useful life before making a call. Similarly, if there are more than one option to choose for a service, it will be reliability that he will be more concerned with.
In conclusion, if a product or a service is a good value for its price people will often buy it. However, some people have no other choice but to buy from the lower range due to economic restrictions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, similarly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65328467153 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55765475534 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594890510949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5650909666 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0769230769 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191757519903 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655193443472 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044625566438 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116509960901 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444952966997 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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