Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes.Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?

Everyone has a fascination for dresses. However, there is so much more than just the way we look in them, as they also reveal many hidden cultural and personal facts about an individual.

Firstly, the simplicity and sophistication in the choice of attire informs the cultural upbringing of a person. many people who wear plain and casual clothes tend to come from simple family background and the lower rung of the society. On the other hand, people who appear to come from higher class often sport sophisticated hats and other wearables apart from their foreign designer clothes to appear couth and suave.

Additionally, attitude and inner qualities of a person is also well-reflected in the manner in which he covers himself up. A sociable and well-manneded person looks to obey the accepted norms of society in his dressing while those who are rebellious and arrogant often defy the dress codes. For example, students at college who are victims of substance abuse ofen tend to take a liking for ragged jeans, while his colleagues are more likely to appear in formal uniforms. Moreover, colour preferences also depict the type of persona and his outlook on life with people of calm and equanimous nature often showing a desire for light shades while more passionate ones going for chequered patterns.

In conclusion, kind of society you come from and your outlook on life can be easily told by the attire you choose for yourself. It is therefore, essential to be mindful of our choices in clothing to represent ourselves truly.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98832684825 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66416229862 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630350194553 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4724800662 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.545454545 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1818181818 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139955315498 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519463775415 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403464606852 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857030033088 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408191849825 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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