Some people decide to move to another country when they retire. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this practice?
There is a school of thought that nowadays many individuals are moving abroad after their retirement. Moving to a foreign nation has its own positives and negatives, which will be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost benefit of moving to another country is that it gives them a big break from their daily routine. In other words, may be a person who lived his whole life in a country, where he had experienced everything, and he wanted to explore other cultures. For example, most of the developed countries like the US, Canada are welcoming millions of immigrants from other nations. Another reason would be people who are already in foreign nations are inviting their kith and kins by showing them the facilities that they have. Owing to this, one want to have those experiences and in order to enjoy them, they often travel abroad after their at retirements
Moving towards the drawbacks of this practice is that firstly, it might lead to feelings of self isolation. This is because a person unable to adjust in the society and finding it very challenging to be a part of alien culture. Eventually, it leads to homesickness. Moreover, it is also possible that as an immigrant, he might face racism or any other discrimination although it is strictly against law. Thus, due to these circumstances a person loses his interest to live in a foreign country.
In conclusion, after discussing the negatives and positives it is clear that despite taking so much effort, if one is not able to live peacefully then there is no means to shift in another nation. One should embrace their culture and try to live in their host country.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88339222615 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72133904064 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60777385159 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6177101423 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.307692308 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148815287879 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453381770883 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526885531011 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753247215503 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451678403532 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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