Some people feel that entertainers (eg. film stars, pop musicians and sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid ?
Undeniably, it is true to say that entertainers are highly overrated by paying them exorbitant amounts of money. I completely agree with the given assertion and well substantiate my views in the subsequent paragraphs. Along with this, I will also suggest some other employments that require prompt attention.
To begin with, indeed the popularity of entertainers have a huge role to play as the cover wide range of audience from toddlers to older generations going to their recognition and fame they are paid higher if compared to other works according to recent research done by Economic Times Newspaper equalled demonstrated that a singer or actor who has a huge fan following was paid more as compared to other stars hence this is more like a pattern and there is no doubt that stars are paid heavily
On the other hand, jobs which show selfless attitude should be paid more.
To illustrate, working in military service requires strenuous efforts of a person and in return, they do not want anything big. So, by increasing their pay structures their efforts are appreciated and it will motivate them to work in a better way. Similarly, the people working in teaching and medical professions also require a hike in their salary as their work involves great care and patience for the students and patients respectively.
In conclusion, I firmly agree that entertainers are paid hefty amounts. But there are other professions which also need immediate attention by the authorities, and their hard work should be rewarded by paying them extravagantly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... has a huge fan following was paid more as compared to other stars hence this is m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, similarly, so, well, in conclusion, no doubt, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10546875 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86037540133 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62109375 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.928164411 49.4020404114 293% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.222222222 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4444444444 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4444444444 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228919279426 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783678513832 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710805328488 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139668478003 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746519879588 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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