Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.
In the modern era, technology has become an integral part of people's lives. Whilst some people are of the belief that online reading and technological devices will replace the traditional ways of reading, others have a diverse view. I am of the view that online libraries and Internet platforms will replace the habit of reading. In this essay, my opinion will be demonstrated before reaching a conclusion.
To begin with, People have to commute to work every day, and need to work more than 12 hours. In other words, most males and females cannot find time to read books or news due to their responsibility. Therefore, reading on Internet website it is the easiest way; they can do it anytime during work or travailing from place to place by using Mobile applications. In addition to that, if people did not have the time to read a book, they would listen to it on E-book websites. Cairo University showed that 75% from Youth prefer to listen to books than reading them. Hence, reading online it a good solution to solve the problem to find time to read.
In addition to that, nowadays, cost of life has become more expensive. Not only do law salary the main reason of this but also increasing on prices has the same impact. Therefore, Follow news and read online is affordable for reader than purchase books and newspaper. For example, an article has been published by the Economist showed that reading online is cheaper than using hard copy by 80%. Thus, Reading online safes money for people.
In conclusion, the power of cutting edge tools and devices have shifted the balance from the hands of a few to the masses; therefore, I believe reading books, magazines and newspaper online is the convenient solution in the modern age, and it will substitute the traditional way of reading by using hard copy .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80891719745 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53175632669 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550955414013 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7280544118 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164159378436 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551328413914 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571906584812 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109191143734 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711197668848 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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