Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that someone’s clothes could ascertain personality as well as civilization. I partly agree with this assertion; while it may be true in some ways, I do believe that it couldn’t be definite statement.
On the one hand, in many countries, some people wear specific dresses which discriminate themselves from other in terms of respecting their ideology and attitudes. For example, simplicity, equality and humidity are being promoted by Dervishes who are always seen in plain and ordinary clothes. Consequently, although the majority of individuals have seen in normal and standard outfits such as blouse and pants around the world, most nationalities have determined own costumes. Japanese or Scots, for instance, utilize their costumes in their formal ceremonies, introducing an ancient history their countries in all the world. Finally, the characteristic of some people occasionally might be shown by how they dress. We often are likely to see an easy going person in comfortable clothes rather than in black tie.
On the other hand, there are a large number of people with various tastes for clothing which shouldn’t lead anybody judging about someone’s manner. In the first place, we have been always told ‘do not judge persons according to their outwards’. Anyone who is in dark clothes, for instance, might be considered as a malignant one unconsciously by others. Also, if someone has a good or splendid appearance, it doesn’t prove anything decisive about his or her habits or conventions. Therefore, people looking weird in our opinion, couldn’t be speculated about their traits or traditions.
In conclusion, people outlook or culture might be represented by the way of dressing, however I believe that clothes are not going to be the main determinant of specification.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 722, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are often
...ly might be shown by how they dress. We often are likely to see an easy going person in c...
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Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ck tie. On the other hand, there are a large number of people with various tastes for clothing...
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Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have always been
...e's manner. In the first place, we have been always told 'do not judge persons accordi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, by the way, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44947735192 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20458248537 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648083623693 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.334541178 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.714285714 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2857142857 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240652844785 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078970589601 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455621316567 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13412411361 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538968114963 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.