Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?
In cosmopolitan cities, individuals from various walks of life get to meet and work together. judging people based on their dressing about their personal traits and culture could be misleading. Whether this approach could help - is something that needs to be pondered on. this essay discusses this conundrum in detail.
based on the attire, people often tend to gauge other people’s culture and character. At times, this approach may be useful in business practices. An individual practising certain religion, can be prima facie identified only by their dressing. For example, people from Gulf, who follow Islam, wear traditional clothing like Abbaya and Kundura, presenting their ethnicity and religion. this may help a business traveller to the region to understand what behaviour would be proper while dealing with Arabs. Furthermore, Muslims only eat Halal products and are strictly forbidden from eating pork as per their religious texts. So, while inviting people to share a meal, one can plan appropriate place and food to please their guests.
However, as it is said “never read a book by its cover”, is also true in this context. Over reliance on people’s appearance may be misleading. people wearing darker shades of clothes are not always sombre. some people disguise their character and culture by wearing different types of clothes. To maintain demure outlook at workplaces, people wear conservative and sober clothes. Hence, the generalisation about public based on their outfits may not be right. people sometimes dress up based on the weather condition in their countries. like women and men in India wear Sarees and Dhotis because of the tropical weather of Indian subcontinent. But not all men and women dress in those attires as some don’t find them comfortable to wear.
based on the above discussion, judging people based on their garments could help some people only in certain specific situation and not always.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36774193548 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75609408972 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609677419355 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5335625544 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.2380952381 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7619047619 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239832272547 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074902917313 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716173731355 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146591655152 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379304155183 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.