Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
Clothes are one of the most important accessories that humans possess. It is commonly believed that an individual's dressing style reveals a lot about their traditions, religion and behavior. However, in my perspective, the choice of cloth may give some idea regarding a person's religion and culture but, fail to judge his or her characteristics. This essay will discuss my point of view in detail before reaching to any conclusion.
With the social advancements in society, more and more people prefer to wear clothes that are trend setting. Consequently, the popularity of regional clothing is decreasing. For instance, san is an Indian formal wear but due to modernization most females do not wear it anymore. In such circumstances, it becomes difficult to differentiate people belonging to various religions.
Although, people do wear their traditional outfits during celebrations but it will not provide a clear picture of the customs they follow. To illustrate, in Gujarat during the festival of navratri, people from all over the world despite of different castes dress up in gujarati traditional wear and so there is no demarcation of religion at such times.
On the other hand, judgment of an individual's character by the way he or she dresses in unjust. A person may like to experiment with his or her clothing. Because of this, their dressing sense may seem odd to normal public but it does not mean that they are characterless people. To site an example, actor and models are often witnessed wearing funky attire. As, it is part of their profession to dress up in such manner, it would be wrong to make any notions regarding their style of fashion.
In summary, it is difficult to conclude a person's behavior, character and culture based on their external appearances in today's society. Opinions based on externalities are usually unreliable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, regarding, so, for instance, in summary, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02302631579 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88184742501 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582236842105 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 304.0 20.2975951904 1498% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1527.0 106.682146367 1431% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 304.0 20.7667163134 1464% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 107.0 7.06120827912 1515% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227615943142 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.227615943142 0.084324248473 270% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1150019836 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029186412064 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 154.2 13.0946893788 1178% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -237.08 50.2224549098 -472% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 121.8 11.3001002004 1078% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.32 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.23 8.58950901804 270% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 123.6 10.1190380762 1221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 124.0 10.7795591182 1150% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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