Some people say that money can make life easier and more comfortable. But others say that having a great amount of wealth can bring some problems.What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of a having a lot of money?

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Some people say that money can make life easier and more comfortable. But others say that having a great amount of wealth can bring some problems.
What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of a having a lot of money?

Money is one of the most important elements of our lives and brings peace of mind and happiness. Although a few people believe that it the key to living a successful and relaxing life, others think completely different. They perceive that excessive money can cause several problems. This essay will outline some significant advantages and drawbacks associated to it.
To begin with, one of the main benefits of having an inordinate amount of money is to buy anything without thinking a second time. Most people, these days, think several times before purchasing any items, such as cars, laptops, or any smartphone. However, rich people do not think twice, they buy it and enjoy using it. Therefore, unlike poor or middle-class person, their life is free from worries of everyday life. Furthermore, this is not just limited to materialistic items; in fact, they can get access to any facility around the world, for example, educational and health care services. These are all facilities for which people usually struggle in their entire life, yet a rich man can get it all easily.
In contrast, abundant money has also some pitfalls associated to it. As people want to take advantage of wealthy people for their personal benefit, money becomes a source of stress, envy and conflicts among people. As a result, affluent people often suffer from depression and their interpersonal relationships becomes extremely weak. For that reason, people with enormous wealth do not live with their extended families. They prefer to live in solitude, which eventually causes mental problems later in their lives.
In summary, despite the fact that huge amount of money can make our life more beautiful and luxurious, it could also break important human relationships. Therefore, abundance of money should not be a priority because human beings can live with moderate amount of money, but not without blood relatives and friends, which are more imperative to live a happy life.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, in contrast, in fact, in summary, such as, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.146875 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65061718933 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1768784534 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8823529412 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290471693803 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872159238411 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511756183655 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175702082784 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409153432359 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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