Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Upbringing of the children is toughest job in the modern era as they will be the guardians of our planet and they should be rise in the adequate way. In the same context, many people advocate that kids should be push to take part in curricular activities where team participation occur so that they can grow as human while others feels that child should keep himself busy with its own. Both the views are well argued and supported, hence should be scrutinised before reforming any opinion.
Admittedly, group activities help children to learn many qualities which can help them in the latter stage of their lives. Leadership quality can only be learnt from team sports and Prime Minister of Pakistan, Mr Imran Khan, admitted that he got such skills from cricket only is the silent example of this. Further more, In the group activities, there is only win-win situation as either they can win the games or learn some new techniques
However, in order to known the potentials of ourself, it is necessary to spend time on their own. This will not only make them independent, but can also increase their knowledge. For an instance, Mr Elon Musk, an Inventor, developed rockets merely by reading and he is a prime example of latter point given above. After that, a child become more responsible as he has to handle everything and he/she can not blame others for their lose.
Having dwelled on thoughts, I feel that group activities can make a child more competing and boost him by new techniques which are necessary for their future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the toughest'.
Suggestion: is the toughest
Upbringing of the children is toughest job in the modern era as they will be t...
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Message: Did you mean 'risen'?
Suggestion: risen
...rdians of our planet and they should be rise in the adequate way. In the same contex...
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Message: Did you mean 'pushed'?
Suggestion: pushed
...any people advocate that kids should be push to take part in curricular activities w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, so, well, while, as to, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80377358491 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47290478971 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615094339623 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1578071114 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.3 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226033113163 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856966883875 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513425250754 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126708287995 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195338408794 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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