Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It fi often argued by some people that children should be motivated to participate in group activities in their leisure time; however, others believe that it is vital for children to learn themselves how to occupy their free time. This essay will discuss both views and I would like to give my own opinion.
Some children are afraid of competitions and activities and they do not like to take part in these activities by own. Because of their kind of behaviour, they face so many problems in their future due to lack of confidence and fear about competitions, Therefore, entire life they are enabled to conquer over failure, which comes across their path. These competitions and activities are leading the path of success. For instance, If someone wants to pursue their career in marketing and from his childhood, he is habitual of competitions, then he never fears failures.
On the other side, some parents thought that children have to occupy their leisure time by own. However, they believe that if children are free to choose, then they utilized their time according to their hobbies. For instance, some children are very possessive about their future and they know about right and wrong. For instance, if a child is interested in painting, and aware, and want to select this as their career, then he should not be forced to participate in other activities.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that parents should encourage their children to participate in organised activities if they have no special work to do in their leisure time and have no other goals. Along with this, by participating in these events children can boost their confidence and get help to conquer any competition in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 325, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...and get help to conquer any competition in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97202797203 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66195771496 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524475524476 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5511178429 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.505213591102 0.244688304435 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194936023117 0.084324248473 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113536344013 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.336260458492 0.151304729494 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100991395919 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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