Some people say that television is a very useful tool when it comes to education. Others argue that television is a much overused, ineffective teacher.
Discuss both of these views and give your opinion as to the usefulness of television as an educational tool.
In today’s world, it has been observed that education could be imparted to the students with the help of television. While some people believe television is an indispensable tool with regards to education, others argue that it is an fruitless. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and will propose my opinion in a latter view.
On the one hand, children’s could gain knowledge from the television, if it is inculcated in a proper way. For example, there are many channels which are pre programmed in the DTH or cable package for the children, from the playgroup till high school. Students who are majoring in any subject, might use the mode of television to gain more knowledge. For example, there are many food travel bloggers, which portray their shows on television and could be helpful for students who are doing majors in tourism industry. Television is important mass media for adults and senior citizens. Grown up people could know about the share market and other happening news around the world, whereas for senior citizens, there are many health related shows, which could help them healthy, if they include in their daily routine.
On the other hand, some people has belief that it is inappropriate as many people overuse it. There are many students, who watch cartoon shows or other entertainment serials for a longer time, rather than watching educational videos and it might deviate their mind from their studies. Most of the adults prefer to watch television for a longer time. They might suffer from health related issues like obesity and heart related problems, if seated and watched for a longer time.
To sum up, Each coin has two sides. If television used as a proper channel, it is an good option for educational mean. So, the parents should keep a proper watch on the students, if they are spending long time for watching other television shows rather than educational videos. Adults should also limit their time for watching television and they should engage in some exercise , to stay fit and healthy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...rom the television, if it is inculcated in a proper way. For example, there are many channels w...
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Suggestion: much; little
... more knowledge. For example, there are many food travel bloggers, which portray the...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun food seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much food', 'a good deal of food'.
Suggestion: much food; a good deal of food
... more knowledge. For example, there are many food travel bloggers, which portray their sh...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
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... and they should engage in some exercise , to stay fit and healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas, while, as for, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9710982659 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56139392035 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528901734104 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8244900877 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.176470588 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215867626932 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836524227276 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082628110584 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152323912865 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696884810805 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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