Some people think that is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.Discuss both these views and give your opinion.Give reasons for your answers and include

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Some people think that is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.

Education is not gender bias irrespective of the school of thought. However, different ideology believes that educating boys and girls in different schools is often better having both genders learning within same citadel. In this essay both scope would be discussed in details.

In proximity, it’s far-fetched that both genders learning within the same institution builds emotional intelligence which helps the boys and girls manage themselves by building character, stamina and temperance relating to each other. Not only in such aspect, also develops socialization which can’t be overemphasized. Moreover, interaction among them fosters proper understanding of each gender, understanding how each gender coordinate their way of thinking and habitation which propels respect. Although, this inhibits some limiting factors such as gender superiority and inferiority complex whereby every ego incumbent in boys can be tested due to behavioral occurrences from the girl and as such low self-esteem residence in females which aids bullying from the boys.

Furthermore, the benefit of boys and girls been educated in different schools activates gender autonomy which instills sense of leadership. Historically, it can drawn from inference that legends and strong elites developed from separate schooling such as Mahatma Gandhi and Adolf Hitler. Even more, focus has been strengthened in a n environment where each gender is fully present without the other whereby this has built many to the part of excellence. However, this shutdown the affection sides of each gender such as Margaret Thatcher.

To conclude, even though some upholds separate school for educating both genders, my opinion support that the both genders benefits more when mixed which help them in the area of marital bliss.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67158671587 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86205123363 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623616236162 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9120665893 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.083333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200976405386 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762317632488 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062673536182 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141993379925 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379763954455 0.056905535591 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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