Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, prisoner and their behaviours are quite disputable among certain demographic of society. These people claim that, instead of keeping the prisoners in jail they should be encouraged to do free of cost civic job. This essay will discuss why captives should remain behind the bar.
On the one hand, some people believes best way to punish captives is by allowing them to work for the society without getting paid. They claim that actual punishment one can observe while living in a community where they can see everything but cannot achieve it. Effectively utilise their imprisonment time in the society by letting them to work in the toughest job such as construction of roads, bridges, governments labouring jobs, and many more. Research was conducted in Germany where out of 100, 50 people were sent for unpaid civic jobs and 50 people were in prisoner. The results show that people working outside were more productive and improved behaviour than those who were in prison. These instance proves that community activities making prisoners busy and allowing them to punish in an effective way whereas in jail they interact will all the corrupt people and don’t feel themselves punished.
Actual punishment for any wrongdoing or crime must be observed in a proper confined space. The place where everything from the world is erased and have limited access. They are being taught to be disciplined, given different tasks, as well as punish for extreme behaviour. There is certain prisoner who are extremely rages and can rely staying behind the bar. A research study shows that in Australia almost 80% captives after finishing their punishment period are proven to be well behaved and no longer involved in crimes. Overall, the idea that prisoner should be encouraged to serve for the community is ill-informed and may lead to work situation for the society.
This essay argues that people who are in favour of community work have a flawed understanding of prisons and their behaviour. In my opinion, imprisonment is very necessary for the captives to stay from the family and world to learn lessons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'believes the best'.
Suggestion: believes the best
...he bar. On the one hand, some people believes best way to punish captives is by allowing t...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an effective way" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...soners busy and allowing them to punish in an effective way whereas in jail they interact will all ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, whereas, while, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08908045977 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58752680239 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563218390805 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9012523113 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.176470588 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253088523364 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798254548761 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588188461856 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158918809279 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689027502674 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.