Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, prisoner and their behaviours are quite disputable among certain demographic of society. These people claim that, instead of keeping the prisoners in jail they should be encourage to do free of cost civic job. This essay will discuss why captives should stay behind the bar.
On the one hand, some people believes best way to punish captives is by allowing them to work for the society without getting paid. They claim that real punishment one can observe while living in a community where they can see everything but cannot achieve it. Effectively use their imprisonment time in the society by letting them to work in the toughest job such as construction of roads, bridges, governments labouring jobs, and many more. Research was conducted in Germany where out of 100, 50 people was sent for unpaid civic jobs and 50 people were in prisoner. The results show that people working outside were more productive and improved behaviour than those who were in prison. These instance proves that community activities making prisoners busy and allowing them to punish in an effective way since in jail they interact will all the corrupt people and don’t feel themselves punished.
Actual punishment for any wrong doing or crime must be observed in a proper confined space. The place where everything from the world is erased and have limited access. They are taught to have discipline, given different tasks, as well as punish for extreme behaviour. There is certain prisoner who are extremely rages and can rely staying behind the bar. A research study shows that in Australia almost 80% captives after finishing their punishment period are proven to well-behaved and no longer involve in crimes. Overall, the idea that prisoner should be encourage to serve for the community is ill-informed and may lead to work situation for the society.
This essay argues that people who are in favour of community work have a flawed understanding of prisons and their behaviour. In my opinion, imprisonment is very necessary for the captives to stay from the family and world to learn lessons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encouraged'?
Suggestion: encouraged
...ng the prisoners in jail they should be encourage to do free of cost civic job. This essa...
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Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...soners in jail they should be encourage to do free of cost civic job. This essay will...
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Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'believes the best'.
Suggestion: believes the best
...he bar. On the one hand, some people believes best way to punish captives is by allowing t...
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Line 3, column 787, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an effective way" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...soners busy and allowing them to punish in an effective way since in jail they interact will all th...
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Line 5, column 560, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encouraged'?
Suggestion: encouraged
...erall, the idea that prisoner should be encourage to serve for the community is ill-infor...
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Line 5, column 570, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'serving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: serving
... idea that prisoner should be encourage to serve for the community is ill-informed and m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, while, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06358381503 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57584992576 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566473988439 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2130374733 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.058823529 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23440332551 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741806521499 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642429784028 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151883659975 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666344121138 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.