Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is argued by some that all issues related to the environment should be resolved worldwide, whereas others refute this statement by saying that it is preferable to do so nation by nation. In my opinion, while both side have merits and drawbacks, I believe that strategies and solutions for environmental problems must be applied within each individual countries.
On the one hand, for some, all concerns regarding to the environment, namely, pollution, green houses gases, climate change, affect all countries in the same way. Thus, collaborative efforts and international agreement are essential tools to lessen or even eradicate, all environmental threats. In other words, nations, as an unit, must work hand-in-hand to be successful at this matter. A good example of national collaborations is the well known Kyoto Protocol, a multilateral agreement signed to fight against global warming with, up to now, some positive results.
On the other hand, others, including myself, firmly claimed that environmental matters have a starting point within countries' boundaries, therefore all measures to find workable solutions, logically, are in the hand of local the local governments. So, the positive desired outcomes will have a quicker and strong impact on the local ecosystem and nature. For instance, in my country, Spain, as a way to reduce air pollution, only electric or hybrid cars are allowed, by law, to circulate in the major cities.
To sum up, although the negative consequences derived from environmental problems can affect the whole planet, the wisest strategy to combat it is to do it at level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34375 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0205998473 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66015625 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.9375726527 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.8 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169747236373 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604543579336 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595846975319 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099716002757 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770250533901 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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