These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult.Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, many employees are sponsored with work visa to work in foreign countries. Married couples prefer taking their spouse and children along with them on dependent visa. Such situations can lead to both pros and cons in the life the offsprings that move along with their parents to different countries at a young age. Through the course of this essay, I will put forth my viewpoint considering both the sides of the argument.
To begin with, commuting to a foreign country for adolescents can be really exciting. They might be exhilarated to see huge malls that encompasses varied electric automobiles to play with, and the alluring toys which they never saw in their country. The would visit beautiful parks, attractive aquariums, and meet new people, which will in return empower their imagination growth. Moreover, their linguistic and communication skills can also highly benefit from it. The teenagers can learn about a host of juvenile rights, which they would rarely learn in developing countries.
However, moving abroad can also cause severe problems to the children. Especially, if they are studying in school and college, then they might have to cop up with the lessons as per the Institute. The study standards may vary vastly depending upon the countries like there is huge in difference between the United States and the United Kingdom. Such students might need counselling facilities for sometime, but they might face inferiority complex issues. It may take a long time to resolve, therefore resulting in a big set back in their life. Adding to this, it can also aggravate their situation more, if their progenitors decide to change to a new country again in a short span of time.
To conclude, there are abundant of benefits that children can gain by moving with their families to a new country. But there can be severe disadvantages which cannot be ignored. Hence, guardians should take this step considering the overall factors that can create a greater impact on their families. I am inclined to believe if proper decision is taken it can lead to a successful decision, thus benefiting everyone in the family.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, thus, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 7.85571142285 293% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07082152975 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6710711512 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603399433428 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8723842915 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.2105263158 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5789473684 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145901256606 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474254693016 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389958980382 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935599335578 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346407051383 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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