Things like puzzles, board games and pictures can contribute to a child’s development. What would you give a child to help him/her develop and why? Give details and examples in your explanation.
Engagement of children in various activities like puzzles, board games and pictures can be a very vital contribution to the child's growth. I am going to shed some light on some of the activities which is quintessential for children development along with the reasons of doing it.
Firstly, Children should engage themselves in activities like puzzles because when children flip, turn, remove etc, pieces of the puzzle, they are learning the connection between their hand and their eyes. The eyes see the puzzle, and the brain then envisions how the puzzle needs to look for what piece need to be found and placed. Then the brain, eyes and hands work together to find the piece, manipulate it accordingly and fit it into the puzzle accurately.
Secondly, board games are another important facet, in which children should be engaged on a daily basis. The reason for this is that it help the kids to send signals in small tiny particles to brain to recognize objects and form multiple strategies to win the game. In fact, I have not played so many board games during my childhood. For example, kid who engage themselves in more than one form of board games were found to be more accurate in predicting the name of the object as compared to other students who play few board games only.
To conclude, Children would be able to reach to their higher level of potential only If they engage themselves in things like puzzles and board games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86693548387 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62957334131 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.5808477225 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.111111111 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5555555556 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2222222222 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149007702972 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698586978533 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727760051269 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961289863348 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546285783166 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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