today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the sahara desert or the antarctic.
Now a day, tourists like to travel for an adventurous experience instead of pleasant holidays. Therefore, several tourists choose a detrimental place to visit. In this essay, I will discuss the pros and cons of travelers, who would like to travel to remote places.
Tourism is not just restricted to a leisure activity but became a sport for individuals. Today, many fitness freaks tend to accept challenges, like a marathon race across sahara desert or spending 100 days in extreme cold weathered places like Antarctic. This will also encourage them to explore new unknown places for mankind and chances to indulge in a new culture. For instance, Robert Junior, an American athlete ran across the sahara desert in 180 days and became the first human being to do so. Now, his feat of success speaks louder than his actions.
Although, conversely; adventure sport can be life-threatening. Mountain climbing getting popular among Europeans, but according to the Euro24 news every year an average of 20 climbers die because of frostbite. To illustrate, in vertigo movie shooting the five crew members were fell sick because of lack of oxygen and they were immediately fly off to the Nepal capital hospital for suitable treatment. But everyone doesn’t have an immediate backup.
All in all, every coin has two sides so do tourism as well. I personally believe that tourists should keep exploring alien places but with proper training to handle the unpredictable situations. Most importantly, every enthusiast should have the correct equipment for correct place and first aid kit for survival.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... would like to travel to remote places. Tourism is not just restricted to a leis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22093023256 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79800131692 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686046511628 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5041631111 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122151294194 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380423855498 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554674088134 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676412699967 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448572858858 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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