Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
It is true to say that the number of globetrotters is kept on increasing, especially in the places having extreme conditions such as the Sahara desert and Antarctica. There have been pros and cons for visitors going to these places, which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, one of the main advantages
is that the majority of individuals will discover many new adventurous things. To be more clear, this unusual experience might be very unique and challenging for some travellers. The Sahara desert is known to be one of the hottest places having an extremely high temperature, thus making the place unsuitable for stay. However, the individuals will still prefer to go to such places and want to explore more about themselves by facing multiple challenges during their journey. For example, one of the popular shows named "Wild vs Bear Grylls" telecasted on the discovery channel encourages the masses to experience different places and enjoy the thrilling experience by visiting such places.
Moving ahead, indeed multiple new things could be learned by taking above-mentioned risks. But on the other hand, some visitors who initially came for adventure but later they find it difficult to stay in those particular places. And due to this, some of them start having panic attacks, difficulties in breathing or any other health-related issues. To illustrate, in 2015 a report published by "The Global tour and Travels" had shown that the tourists who came from visiting the extreme places had more health problems as compared to the visitors who choose normal places to go. Hence, due to the lack of experience one has to go through hard times.
In conclusion, after discussing the merits and demerits of visiting the extreme areas, it is believed that a person should never push himself to danger just to have a trilled experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, still, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18892508143 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86946095883 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599348534202 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.309162153 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.538461538 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276430928609 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814920256102 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765474052831 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116213063756 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837661258042 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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