The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think the new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answer.
The most part of our society don’t realize that the 21st century can change their lives dramatically. I, personally believe that there are two main reasons that are the most important for our life which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the technology is not standing on one place, it is continuously developing. The main and the most essential danger for all humanity is artificial intelligence. Everything started in 20th century with the invention of the transistor. Since then their number doubles each year and as a result we can see processors which have billions of it inside. With the speed of processors came the opportunity to develop complex automative systems or artificial intelligence. They are everywhere nowadays, even in our smartphones or laptops, in cars and airplanes. The main danger from them will come in future when they become smarter then human and I am absolutely sure that this will happen. The day they become smarter than humans we will call day X, it is a final point of all humanity. That day computers will decide what to do and when. They will be unstoppable and will create smarter and smarter computers day after day. At one point it will be fully impossible to end this process. Computers might think that we, humans, are danger for them and will try to isolate us. We have maybe twenty or forty years left before the apocalypses or we may call it dooms day.
Secondly, other crucial problem in terms of surviving is global heating. This process like artificial intelligence is unstoppable. Humanity did everything to produce more and more CO2 to the atmosphere, as a result we have a global warming all over the Earth. Oceans are becoming warmer, ice is melting on the both sides of our Earth: on South and North pole. Therefore, weather has changed throughout the world. For instance, we had hurricanes maybe once per ten years, nowadays we have them almost every year. The Earth is dying and if we wouldn’t do anything with this issue in the nearest future we are doomed.
In conclusion, I am the opinion that 21 century might become the last century for all humanity because of these two threats: artificial intelligence and global heating.
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Suggestion: smarter than
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Suggestion: than
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'computers'' or 'computer's'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87566137566 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70106338323 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544973544974 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2742443268 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.1304347826 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4347826087 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73913043478 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124829078011 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379198150212 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472269638005 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862819035457 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372962367799 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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