A/D when people look for jobs they should try to get a job for their entire lives.
Job plays an important part in our lives. People at certain time of their lives strive to look for a good job. Since good jobes are limited, I agree that people should try to got job for all entire life.
Working for the same position for the whole entire life carries many benefits. One of the most important beneifits is learning all the details about the job. People who are staple in their career are more likely to gain valauble experience and are more likely know everything about the job. For example, an experience computer technation is more likely able to fix complecated computer errors compare to an unexperience one.
In addition to work experience, People should get a job that they beleive they are going to stay on it for their entire life because work is usually boring. Chosing a routin job or undesirable job can force the employees to quit their jobs. People who are choose to work for unsocial job position experience some mental illness. For instance, a study conducted at the University of California indicated that people who are chose to work for gas station, feels that they are not valuable. Also, people who work as a security gourd suffer form lonlyness. Therefore they are at a great risk from depression and social anxiety.
Finally, There is no doubt that working in different job position have some advantages. For example, people gain different experience for different work field, people can explore different culture and different people. However, companies are looking for people who are expert in certain field or skill. Moreover, job position are fierce and every day more and more people compete for a single job position. Therefore, devoting you effort to fing a job that you will work for it the whole entire live have significant advantages over working for differnt job. For instance, people will gain specific knowledge and details about the job, which are likely augment their chances for geting hired, offered promotion and work stability.
As a conclusion, we can safely say that there is nothing important that devoting you life for a certain job. People who prefer to foucus only on one job for their entire lives are more likely more experience and more successfuly than those who are switching form one job to another. Therefore, I agree that people should look for a job that they are going to work for it their entire life.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Since good jobes are limited, I agree that people should try to got job for all entire life.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and got
People who are choose to work
People who choose to work
working in different job position have some advantages
working in different job position has some advantages
which are likely augment their chances
which are likely to augment their chances
there is nothing important that devoting you life for a certain job
there is nothing important to devote you life for a certain job
are more likely more experience
are more likely more experienced
they are going to work for it their entire life.
they are going to work for it in their entire life.
Sentence: Since good jobes are limited, I agree that people should try to got job for all entire life.
Error: jobes Suggestion: jobs
Sentence: One of the most important beneifits is learning all the details about the job.
Error: beneifits Suggestion: benefits
Sentence: People who are staple in their career are more likely to gain valauble experience and are more likely know everything about the job.
Error: valauble Suggestion: valuable
Sentence: For example, an experience computer technation is more likely able to fix complecated computer errors compare to an unexperience one.
Error: complecated Suggestion: complicated
Error: technation Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: unexperience Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In addition to work experience, People should get a job that they beleive they are going to stay on it for their entire life because work is usually boring.
Error: beleive Suggestion: believe
Sentence: Chosing a routin job or undesirable job can force the employees to quit their jobs.
Error: routin Suggestion: routing
Sentence: People who are choose to work for unsocial job position experience some mental illness.
Error: unsocial Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Also, people who work as a security gourd suffer form lonlyness.
Error: lonlyness Suggestion: loneliness
Sentence: Therefore, devoting you effort to fing a job that you will work for it the whole entire live have significant advantages over working for differnt job.
Error: differnt Suggestion: different
Error: fing Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: For instance, people will gain specific knowledge and details about the job, which are likely augment their chances for geting hired, offered promotion and work stability.
Error: geting Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: People who prefer to foucus only on one job for their entire lives are more likely more experience and more successfuly than those who are switching form one job to another.
Error: successfuly Suggestion: successful
Error: foucus Suggestion: focus
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 15 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 15 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 406 350
No. of Characters: 1929 1500
No. of Different Words: 181 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.489 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.751 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.378 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 139 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.455 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.162 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.591 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.357 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.537 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.12 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...he employees to quit their jobs. People who are choose to work for unsocial job positio...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
...yees to quit their jobs. People who are choose to work for unsocial job position exper...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 416, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ity of California indicated that people who are chose to work for gas station, feels th...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
...alifornia indicated that people who are chose to work for gas station, feels that the...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 554, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...a security gourd suffer form lonlyness. Therefore they are at a great risk from depressio...
^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'no doubt']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25393258427 0.229887763892 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.166292134831 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114606741573 0.0866891130778 132% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0292134831461 0.046263068375 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0494382022472 0.0685040099705 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123595505618 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0404494382022 0.0351676179071 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.45778747258 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0314606741573 0.0309702414327 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0696629213483 0.0887237588012 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0179775280899 0.0209618222197 86% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0179775280899 0.0139019557991 129% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2387.0 2387.08602151 100% => OK
No of words: 406.0 408.028673835 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87931034483 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.352216748768 0.338922669872 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.231527093596 0.251872472559 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172413793103 0.174417080927 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113300492611 0.112833075102 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45778747258 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453201970443 0.524397521467 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.5256268462 59.2087087015 82% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4545454545 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.04478527 48.84282405 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 120.699889404 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 0.644075263715 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 41.6072548142 45.7405998639 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.70642201835 1.45489161554 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457855525196 0.300154397459 153% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109322970752 0.103427244359 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0641342519419 0.0752933317313 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.510223367969 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125097985819 0.151897553556 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172811113101 0.114077575197 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112456855796 0.0781384742642 144% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.365678481493 0.336927656856 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0945100229598 0.067059652881 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.327620930958 0.210909579961 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931472930572 0.0618886996521 151% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.4623655914 325% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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