advantages and disadvantages of free health care

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advantages and disadvantages of free health care

Submitted by Sima ab on Sat, 10/05/2019 - 16:12

Everything that is provided free has its drawbacks. There are disadvantages as well as advantages associated with free health care services provided by governments for their citizens.

First, the one disadvantage of free health care is a few allocations of budget into this part of the government. Because there is a law for the distribution of funds among Ministries, the amount of budget of the Ministry of health care is defined in advance. Since dividing budget is associated with meting justice among all hospitals all over a country, there is no guarantee that a hospital can have more budget and facilities rather than whatever the other free hospitals have. Therefore, based on this fact, patients cannot expect to face advanced hospitals. In addition, owing to the lowest total health expenditure, there are few doctors in order to look after over patients, so, from this information, it can be seen that the doctor to patient ratio is very low. All mentioned factors are contributed to the lack of provision of hygiene services being a common occurrence in the free hospitals in every part of the world. Had government not considered full free health care, this shortage of facilities might not have occurred in all hospitals.

Second, the other disadvantage of free health care is the overcrowded hospital making process of healing frustrated for patient. To elaborate, when people of all ranges of incomes are aware of free medical services in hospitals and have their own health insurance, they will feel that they should have a monthly check-up. This taking care of health is amazing as long as they are not obsessed with controlling themselves all the time. In addition, according to all medical doctors, checking our body with blood tests and other physical test has brought about a paranoid of diseases causing a feeling of death in some cases. Moreover, crowded hospitals will postpone the process of looking after of emergencies patient so that the potential target of having free health care is helping people in sever circumstance. Therefore, the provided hospitals will not become effective that much because of the weak services for urgent cases.

Third, when it comes to the benefits of free health care, bestowing a situation in order to get access to free medicine and making well for people of poverty is noteworthy. The budget of this free service is financed through general taxation collected from the people’s revenue with different income levels. Owing to this way of collecting the provision of the expenditure of this service, seldom do poor and needy individuals have to pay the big portion of their salaries in order to pay their taxes. Consequently, they will gain benefits from both the path of the provided services and the paying taxes. That is why most theoreticians have considered this project as a super-profitable transaction. Thanks to this worthwhile service and the benefits which poor citizens can get the most out of it, no longer have they suffered from the pain of sickness and paying the cost private hospitals both. In addition, not only have governments tried to enhance accessibility and feasibility of this service for all people throughout the world, but they also have made a concerted effort in order to improve this service in quality.

In conclusion, although there are several disadvantages alongside with advantages of free healthcare service, the advantages and the benefits of this service outweigh all possible disadvantages.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, third, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in some cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 93.0 52.1666666667 178% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2964.0 1977.66487455 150% => OK
No of words: 569.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20913884007 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88402711743 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85032363249 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467486818981 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 920.7 618.680645161 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0937206591 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.869565217 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7391304348 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4347826087 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326410579133 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120201950664 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133172353429 0.0737576698707 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253204069878 0.150856017488 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112982212382 0.0645574589148 175% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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